Here are some of the comments to questions that we received:
What was especially good about the clip?
- Good continuity with editing, excellent lighting, like the use of cutaways and close ups – use more of those.
- Fitting for genre, great exposition shots, good performance.
- Good shots (car shots) and good use of location.
- Nice flow to the video and the cuts.
- Good filming quality.
Would you want to watch this again? If yes, why, if no, why not?
- Yes! Looking forward to seeing the SFX.
- Yes – once the special effects have been added.
- Yes, good editing and interesting plot but would like to see the final video with the added special effects.
Did you notice any serious issues such as continuity errors, strange edits - did anything not make sense to you?
- The pace is a little slow for the genre and the song, think it needs some more conventional aspects for the genre.
- Missing areas – fill in the gaps.
- Some shakey camera parts.
What would you suggest to improve the video and how?
- Image stabilisation – try the Warp Stabiliser, more close ups of singing and need to show more skill in terms of transitions and SFX.
- Bleep out derogatory words, add effects, adjust duration of some of the shots as they’re too long.
- Just continue editing and maybe add some transitions
- Finish adding in other clips and editing.
