An excellent first piece of research for your portfolio Will - you have selected a range of examples and you have picked out the particular style of your director. This should really help you when generating your own ideas and I am looking forward to seeing how this develops. I like the way you have used text to communicate your thoughts too. Well done!
EBI:
1. Some of the editing is a little jumpy and it would be good to see you work on getting things to flow a bit more fluidly.
2. Well done for bleeping out the sound although this does feel a little odd in places - I can show you how to do this more effectively for future reference.
An excellent first piece of research for your portfolio Will - you have selected a range of examples and you have picked out the particular style of your director. This should really help you when generating your own ideas and I am looking forward to seeing how this develops. I like the way you have used text to communicate your thoughts too. Well done!
ReplyDeleteEBI:
1. Some of the editing is a little jumpy and it would be good to see you work on getting things to flow a bit more fluidly.
2. Well done for bleeping out the sound although this does feel a little odd in places - I can show you how to do this more effectively for future reference.